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by Tsabo6

- Head looks about 5% to large. - The bottom arm is too long. The forearm and the hand are almost the same length as the entire arm abo...

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Pirate Portrait
24x36" Oil on Canvas
This was the second piece. This one is mostly invented. The only strict photo reference was used on the faces. I started with a loose thumbnail, and I designed while I painted, which turned the whole process into something of a marathon. What this piece lacks in realism, it makes up for in gesture and whimsy.
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Cresendo Big Band
24x36" Oil on Canvas
This is one of two intensive paintings I have been working on for the last couple of months. This was a promo piece for a local band that relied heavily on photo reference which was incidentally in B&W, so the color was completely invented. The graphic elements were done in post with Illustrator and Photoshop.
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- Head looks about 5% to large.
- The bottom arm is too long. The forearm and the hand are almost the same length as the entire arm above it. It is partially because it is too long and partially because the top arm is not reading as coming forward in perspective. The perspective can be developed by pulling your strokes around the circumference of the arm instead of the long ways, down the form. (example from Erik Gist - 68.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m61…)
- The shadows could be a shade or two darker and cooler, especially in the face. The tone in the receding area of the light side face is too similar to the tone and value to the dark side of the face; because of this the face feels flat.
I would like to thank everyone who added my first daily deviation to their favorites or to a collection, and additionally to all my new watchers.  I intended to thank everyone personally, but since there was more than 1300 notices, and after fifty replies, the system thought I was sending spam, I do not have the fortitude.  Nevertheless, thank you and I will still do my best to respond to every critique.
Adam

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Adam Antaloczy
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:iconasmartiba:
Asmartiba Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2016  Hobbyist
Great work!
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AdamAntaloczy Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much.
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NudeTaylor Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Wonderful work!
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AdamAntaloczy Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you, and thank you for the watch.
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NudeTaylor Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
You are welcome!  If you like my look and ever need reference photos, I would be honored to give some to you from my private collection.  I have thousands that are not posted on dA (that also fully show my face) - everything from classic nudes to highly erotic.  Please let me know your thoughts and keep up the great work! 

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DDGrafix Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Professional General Artist
Fine body of work!
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AdamAntaloczy Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much.  I looked through your work also, very impressive.  "In Another World" is a great piece.
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DDGrafix Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Professional General Artist
Thanks for taking a look :)
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jarkscousin Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
your gallery its awesome!
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AdamAntaloczy Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much.
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